This my reversing work.
I was watching a new vampire show on Netflix, one where vampires actually die in sunlight, not shine. The glorified death of the vampires basked in the beauty of a baby's first steps. Fire scorching their faces while they take one last, maybe first, look at the sunset. The ash of their body waves in the wind as they disappear like the fallen leaves of autumn. Why is their death so easy?
This is just a start to the piece. Let me know what you think.
I really think this is a great start to something epic! The line "Fire scorching their faces while they take one last, maybe first, look at the sunset" is so powerful! You really can picture this vampires wonder of the very thing that is killing it. I really want to see you continue this piece!
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