This is in response to Kelsey's free entry for week 7.
This piece is very playful, literally. The references to Anastasia and Dimetri were nice a specific, especially if your someone who likes Disney. The change between each of the characters the barbie plays was a nice touch. Katherine, a fitting name for a barbie by the way, was one of the many characters of barbie and the use of the "Katherine look alikes" was a nice phrase that did a great job of explaining that the crowd was most likely filled with the exact same barbie. It might help the story if the location was stabilized. It's not clear exactly where this piece is taking place. Giving a specific description of what the lead barbie looks like might also had a bit of specificity.
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