(This is in response to Drika's Free Entry for Week 4.)
This is great work! Especially for it to be the first time you have posted it. I love how you took from your experience with cooter soup, and created a great work with it. I really enjoyed reading this because, being a southern belle myself, a lot of the references were familiar to me (like the Perry fair and Brillo pads). There was a part where the piece mentions "the stories that have been heard a dozen times" tell the reader a little bit of that story. What would the narrator title it, after hearing the story so many times? Also, what nursery rhyme? Overall I really enjoyed reading this piece. It gave me a great sense of home even though I have never had cooter stoop.
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