This is a response to Drika's Improv of A Martian Sends a Postcard Home by Craig Raine. Wow the first stanza was so captivated! It pushed me to want to read the rest of what you wrote. The idea was very ominous and dark, but with a twist of confusion. That was a really great start, but I would recommend not sounding too much like the original in the second stanza. The third stanza was good too, but somehow it sounded like something I have heard before. Also always think about flow and the way that each line or stanza will sound being followed by the next. Overall it was great, thanks for the read!
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