This is a response to Morgan's Week 1 Reading Response to Next Door.
I find it interesting that reading that short story made you want to write one of your own. I say that because it made me want to do the exact same thing. I just wish I had a scenario to write about like your disappearing roommate (Great back-story already by the way). I would suggest that to push the showing remember to think of ways to show the reader what your character is doing. It should play out like a movie or play as you read it. It might help to actually write what is in the character's mind, then go back and find a way to show those thoughts, feelings, and reactions. I hope you finish it soon I'm interested in reading it!
-Brittany
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